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A nostalgic young writer from Germany is getting his dream scholarship for a US college, but is facing the death of his grandfather and the first meeting with his father after 15 years, and can not decide whether he can leave behind his home and family and friends in order to beginning a new life. But time is running out and the acceptance period expires.
FFF is right. Unless you state in your logline why the young writer is nostalgic, the word just hangs there. That he misses his grandfather doesn't have to be elaborated on in the logline. Lose nostalgic, I say.
FFF is right. Unless you state in your logline why the young writer is nostalgic, the word just hangs there. That he misses his grandfather doesn’t have to be elaborated on in the logline. Lose nostalgic, I say.
See lessIn a leisure female-only Utopia where sex is the only taboo, a willful girl must escape from her restrained community to join her lover who has been sent away.
You don't miss what you've never known. The women could well think they're living in a utopian world. From memory, in Logan's Run they thought they were living in a great world until they found out what they were eating and that there was an outside with trees where you didn't have to die at thirty.Read more
You don’t miss what you’ve never known. The women could well think they’re living in a utopian world. From memory, in Logan’s Run they thought they were living in a great world until they found out what they were eating and that there was an outside with trees where you didn’t have to die at thirty. From IMDB: ‘An idyllic sci-fi future has one major drawback: life must end at 30.’
Maybe you just need to find a way of getting across that they think they’re living in utopia, but we the audience know otherwise. I also think you need a better description for your MC. Make her smart, not confused – she sees what others don’t. Even if she seems confused initially, she’s presumably going to pull it all together. And what’s with the ‘girlfriend’? No men, was she sent away for having lesbian sex? Maybe instead of some drug to chemically castrate the women, you could have some high-tech gadget that they all sleep with. LOL.
I loved Logan’s Run. Great movie.
See lessWhen an out spoken video gamer returns home to care for her injured father. She must enter into and win a video game tournament to keep her fathers farm.
I think Richiev is on the right track.
I think Richiev is on the right track.
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