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  1. Posted: March 14, 2015In: Public

    An estranged couple decides for a last-chance counseling retreat in a forest just to meet a therapist who reveals their secrets that should rather have remained buried

    Lee Brooks Penpusher
    Added an answer on March 16, 2015 at 5:58 am

    I don't like 'alienated' or 'estranged'. I don't know what you mean by alienated in this context, and they're not really estranged if they're attending a counselling retreat together to save their relationship. How about a warring couple?

    I don’t like ‘alienated’ or ‘estranged’. I don’t know what you mean by alienated in this context, and they’re not really estranged if they’re attending a counselling retreat together to save their relationship. How about a warring couple?

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  2. Posted: March 14, 2015In: Public

    After his family is kidnapped and sold to English slavers by renegade Fante tribesmen, Ashanti tribal warrior Mwabo embarks on a perilous voyage across the Atlantic to the sugarcane plantations of modern day Jamaica in search of his wife and son, where he leads a slave rebellion against the tyrannical white masters to reclaim his family's freedom and liberate his fellow Africans from the misery of enslavement.

    Lee Brooks Penpusher
    Added an answer on March 15, 2015 at 2:03 am

    From what I've read, people in the industry won't even look at a 180 page script. Make it your challenge to say what you want to say in two hours or less.

    From what I’ve read, people in the industry won’t even look at a 180 page script. Make it your challenge to say what you want to say in two hours or less.

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  3. Posted: March 14, 2015In: Public

    An estranged couple decides for a last-chance counseling retreat in a forest just to meet a therapist who reveals their secrets that should rather have remained buried

    Lee Brooks Penpusher
    Added an answer on March 15, 2015 at 1:39 am

    Whom or what is the couple alienated from? Do most people know what a hiking therapy is? Is it some kind of new-hippy headspace thing? How is the villain horrific? Evil looking doesn't describe the dog very well. He could be an evil-looking sweetheart. And the whole 'facing each other's feelings' thRead more

    Whom or what is the couple alienated from? Do most people know what a hiking therapy is? Is it some kind of new-hippy headspace thing? How is the villain horrific? Evil looking doesn’t describe the dog very well. He could be an evil-looking sweetheart. And the whole ‘facing each other’s feelings’ thing sounds a bit lame to me. You might have a great story, but I’m not seeing it here. Please have another shot at it.

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