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  1. Posted: March 20, 2015In: Public

    A young British academic visiting America and a besotted underage runaway evade exposure by passing themselves off as uncle and niece while travelling the country together:think Pygmalion/Lolita

    Lee Brooks Penpusher
    Added an answer on March 20, 2015 at 9:54 pm

    Hmm. You've totally confused me now. I say Pygmalion/Lolita and you think that equals Bonnie and Clyde. OMG!

    Hmm. You’ve totally confused me now. I say Pygmalion/Lolita and you think that equals Bonnie and Clyde. OMG!

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  2. Posted: March 20, 2015In: Public

    A young British academic visiting America and a besotted underage runaway evade exposure by passing themselves off as uncle and niece while travelling the country together:think Pygmalion/Lolita

    Lee Brooks Penpusher
    Added an answer on March 20, 2015 at 9:39 pm

    Hi FFF. Thanks for your input. 'think Pygmalion/Lolita' What I've done is actually quite common. I'm trying to say a lot in a few words. Are you saying that you don't think it serves its intended purpose or that it doesn't conform to some rule or other?

    Hi FFF. Thanks for your input. ‘think Pygmalion/Lolita’ What I’ve done is actually quite common. I’m trying to say a lot in a few words. Are you saying that you don’t think it serves its intended purpose or that it doesn’t conform to some rule or other?

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  3. Posted: March 20, 2015In: Public

    A young British academic visiting America and a besotted underage runaway evade exposure by passing themselves off as uncle and niece while travelling the country together:think Pygmalion/Lolita

    Lee Brooks Penpusher
    Added an answer on March 20, 2015 at 4:30 pm

    I'm sort of thinking that by referencing Pygmalion and Lolita it's obvious that it starts with him educating her (he's a good guy) and then mid-point they have sex (he's not such a good guy after all). The only thing I haven't revealed is that he gets caught by the end. What else do you think I shouRead more

    I’m sort of thinking that by referencing Pygmalion and Lolita it’s obvious that it starts with him educating her (he’s a good guy) and then mid-point they have sex (he’s not such a good guy after all). The only thing I haven’t revealed is that he gets caught by the end. What else do you think I should put in there? That he’s breaking the law is obvious. And by describing her as besotted, I’m saying that it’s very much their story. Not to say there aren’t outside obstacles, but I’m assuming anyone reading my logline would expect there would be. I also want to keep it short.

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