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WGA Registration Number: 1680921 An older black woman who suffers from insomnia. She is afraid to fall asleep because once she does she is placed inside a real life threatening situation that she must save the ones involved or they will all die. She tries to convince friends what is happening… They think she is loosing her mind and want to put her into a mental asylum to get help…The only way she is able to awake is when they are brought to safety…..
Dee, I agree with Richiev. This is not a logline as much as it is a synopsis. A logline should be 35-45 words with no sentence breaks. Also, consider not including the WGA registration. This is the no.1 No-No for writers. Interesting concept. I look forward to seeing the rewrite of the logline if yoRead more
Dee, I agree with Richiev. This is not a logline as much as it is a synopsis. A logline should be 35-45 words with no sentence breaks. Also, consider not including the WGA registration. This is the no.1 No-No for writers.
Interesting concept. I look forward to seeing the rewrite of the logline if you choose to.
See lessWhen a father and son novice racing team decides to enter the Baja 500 they face challenges to survive not only the race but drug dealers and corrupt Mexican military.
Thanks Tony. Interesting spin. DPG: There will always be reasons not to do something in life. Life is hard. But, many are driven just by the thrill of attempting to do something. Can I face this and come out the other side? Entering the race is not unreasonable. Hundreds of teams, both professionalRead more
Thanks Tony. Interesting spin.
DPG: There will always be reasons not to do something in life. Life is hard. But, many are driven just by the thrill of attempting to do something. Can I face this and come out the other side?
Entering the race is not unreasonable. Hundreds of teams, both professional and amateur do it every year, but once they are in it they are in it. The whole point of the film is they are trying to get back home but must face life threatening challenges to do so. They no longer care about the race.
And, as Tony pointed out, if the relationship is estranged, then racing together could bring them together. Ultimately it divides them at first, but the challenges force them to work together (their arcs).
Hope that makes sense.
See lessKilling is what he is afraid of. The circumstantial choice of becoming a writer because of his past costs him desertion and rejection from her lover. The writer never gives up. After several years of exploration and reaching the new highs he becomes the Times Contributor Of the Year to prove his mettle. All fame and name is enough, but he realizes why still he is not at peace and kills himself when at his peak.
This is not a logline as much as it is a synopsis. WilsonDownUnder is correct that you must be able to tell the story of your script in one sentence using only 35-45 words. Good luck.
This is not a logline as much as it is a synopsis. WilsonDownUnder is correct that you must be able to tell the story of your script in one sentence using only 35-45 words.
Good luck.
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