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When a playboy, slacker returns to join his father?s growing corporate empire, tensions mount between his toe-the-line older brother over who is better suited to run the company.
Great comments! Yes, the playboy is the protagonist. Adding the element of urgency with a sick father is a nice touch as well as making the older brother corrupt. Thanks for work-shopping.
Great comments!
See lessYes, the playboy is the protagonist. Adding the element of urgency with a sick father is a nice touch as well as making the older brother corrupt.
Thanks for work-shopping.
When a father and son novice racing team decides to enter the Baja 500 they face challenges to survive not only the race but drug dealers and corrupt Mexican military.
dpg: Great questions. First, many off-road teams are two people. Yes, there are single driver vehicles, but in this case my focus is on the dynamic not only of a racing team (amateur I might add) as well as the father-son relationship. The fact they are amateur is integral to this particular story bRead more
dpg:
Great questions.
First, many off-road teams are two people. Yes, there are single driver vehicles, but in this case my focus is on the dynamic not only of a racing team (amateur I might add) as well as the father-son relationship. The fact they are amateur is integral to this particular story because it means they will not have the experience and possibly know-how to deal with some of the problems that more seasoned drivers can. This also sets up two additional conflict.
1. The pro drivers don’t want to deal with the amateurs.
2. Maybe the son, or father, did not really want to go on this adventure and is an unwilling participant not in danger.
The inciting incident at the end of the first act can be that their vehicle breaks down or suffers some mechanical trouble that the two must figure out, seek help from locals, and thus the real trouble begins.
The race actually becomes secondary to the more pressing problem of staying alive. The race is the easy part.
What do you think?
See lessWhen a father and son novice racing team decides to enter the Baja 500 they face challenges to survive not only the race but drug dealers and corrupt Mexican military.
DPG: NIce. I admit, your version could be very exciting as well. Thank you for confirming the entire reason LoglinesRUs exists: to explore storytelling and development through the use of loglines. I love the fact that my simple logline could cause you to come up with something similar yet different.Read more
DPG: NIce. I admit, your version could be very exciting as well. Thank you for confirming the entire reason LoglinesRUs exists: to explore storytelling and development through the use of loglines. I love the fact that my simple logline could cause you to come up with something similar yet different.
Cheers.
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