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  1. Posted: August 16, 2013In: Public

    When a lonely, middle-aged Aussie long-distance truckie finds love online with a city girl, he must overcome his fear of losing what he loves most to win her heart.

    Louise Weihart Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 18, 2013 at 11:31 am

    Thanks for the awesome feedback dpg. I watched 'Up in the Air' last night. A brilliant story. I don't know why but I didn't really connect with the main character/s; felt much more empathy for the poor souls being spat out by the corporate machine. When George didn't 'get the girl' in the end I didnRead more

    Thanks for the awesome feedback dpg. I watched ‘Up in the Air’ last night. A brilliant story. I don’t know why but I didn’t really connect with the main character/s; felt much more empathy for the poor souls being spat out by the corporate machine. When George didn’t ‘get the girl’ in the end I didn’t really feel sorry for him …… Back to the truckie …. When a middle-aged truckie falls in love online with a city writer, he must leave the security of his truck and risk emotional vulnerability to connect with her in her world. … is emotional vulnerability too general?

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  2. Posted: August 17, 2013In: Public

    Kicked out by her mom, a rebellious daughter is forced to join her broke and dysfunctional dad as he takes a last chance assignment to follow a corrupt politician in a cross country bike race.

    Louise Weihart Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 18, 2013 at 10:49 am

    Who is the protagonist and what is their goal?

    Who is the protagonist and what is their goal?

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  3. Posted: August 17, 2013In: Public

    When a governmental Space Station gets taken by a terrorist organisation, its headstrong Chief Architect must escape upon learning that the terrorists have also kidnapped her disabled husband back on earth.

    Louise Weihart Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 18, 2013 at 10:45 am

    What is the MC's main goal? Does she have to abandon the space station (and what are the implications of that) to save her husband? What does she have to overcome/learn? Perhaps that 'charity begins at home' ....

    What is the MC’s main goal? Does she have to abandon the space station (and what are the implications of that) to save her husband? What does she have to overcome/learn? Perhaps that ‘charity begins at home’ ….

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