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When a lonely, middle-aged Aussie long-distance truckie finds love online with a city girl, he must overcome his fear of losing what he loves most to win her heart.
ahhhh okay .... the antagonist is probably the truck!!! (which is also 'the other woman') Or maybe he falls in love with her .... he now has to win her love .... Not sure it's about him moving to the city .... more about him being able to connect in the 'real world' out of the truck and off the roadRead more
ahhhh okay …. the antagonist is probably the truck!!! (which is also ‘the other woman’)
See lessOr maybe he falls in love with her …. he now has to win her love ….
Not sure it’s about him moving to the city …. more about him being able to connect in the ‘real world’ out of the truck and off the road … ie her family and friends etc
When a single father to a teenage daughter learns that he has a fatal brain tumor, he takes her on a road trip to find the mother who abandoned her years before and to try to teach her everything she might need over the rest of her life.
Sounds great! High stakes, ticking clock, inciting incident. What does he have to overcome to make this happen. He has to overcome something/learn something to get the daughter's buy in ......
Sounds great! High stakes, ticking clock, inciting incident. What does he have to overcome to make this happen. He has to overcome something/learn something to get the daughter’s buy in ……
See lessAfter being framed for the murder of his father, a teen boy growing up in the late 1930's finds comfort in the "Red-Ryder" comic strip. In his adventures he struggles to find his father's murderer, and prove his name is clear.
Sounds like a great plot. Perhaps the logline can be simplified .... When a ??? teen boy is framed and then jailed for the murder of his father, he uses the Red Ryder comic to help him find the murderer and clear his name. High stakes, ticking clock, inciting incident.
Sounds like a great plot. Perhaps the logline can be simplified …. When a ??? teen boy is framed and then jailed for the murder of his father, he uses the Red Ryder comic to help him find the murderer and clear his name. High stakes, ticking clock, inciting incident.
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