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  1. Posted: August 8, 2013In: Student Loglines

    Huntington?s disease suffer Jack, has discovered a power in which can prevent the death of his closest friend Gracie, he must defeat the odds and find a way to communicate or have to witness her deteriorate in front of him.

    Louise Weihart Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 16, 2013 at 5:20 pm

    This seems an intriguing plot, very high stakes, and a very strong ticking clock. But it seems a little unclearly presented. From what I understand Huntington's affects movement. ...... What about something along the lines of ... When a Huntington's disease sufferer stumbles on a cure for his dyingRead more

    This seems an intriguing plot, very high stakes, and a very strong ticking clock. But it seems a little unclearly presented. From what I understand Huntington’s affects movement. …… What about something along the lines of … When a Huntington’s disease sufferer stumbles on a cure for his dying friend, he must find a way to regulate his movements to communicate it to her …..

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  2. Posted: August 16, 2013In: Public

    When a lonely, middle-aged Aussie long-distance truckie finds love online with a city girl, he must overcome his fear of losing what he loves most to win her heart.

    Louise Weihart Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 16, 2013 at 5:04 pm

    From what I understand (The Story Series course with Karel), in a love story you only need the hero (protagonist ie truckie) and their lover to be in conflict. Thanks so much for your feedback, much appreciated!!!

    From what I understand (The Story Series course with Karel), in a love story you only need the hero (protagonist ie truckie) and their lover to be in conflict. Thanks so much for your feedback, much appreciated!!!

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  3. Posted: August 16, 2013In: Public

    When a lonely, middle-aged Aussie long-distance truckie finds love online with a city girl, he must overcome his fear of losing what he loves most to win her heart.

    Louise Weihart Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 16, 2013 at 3:50 pm

    hmmm ok interesting thanks ... the idea though is that it is definitely set in Australia. I had another go at the logline ... what do u think? When a middle-aged {Aussie} truckie falls in love with a city writer online, he must venture out of his solitary world to connect with her in hers.

    hmmm ok interesting thanks … the idea though is that it is definitely set in Australia. I had another go at the logline … what do u think? When a middle-aged {Aussie} truckie falls in love with a city writer online, he must venture out of his solitary world to connect with her in hers.

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