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The Toodyay magistrate hates the name Moondyne Joe; he steals his food giving it to the poor. Ruby loves Joe, the witch Vixana likes Joe. Police long for the day they capture Joe. Good on yer, Moondyne Joe.
I thought as much, but I wanted to be sure. Given that this site is for people to try and write a logline for their film script. To improve on what they've written due to the helpful insight of others.
I thought as much, but I wanted to be sure.
See lessGiven that this site is for people to try and write a logline for their film script. To improve on what they’ve written due to the helpful insight of others.
Set to the hit music of pop star Kylie Minogue, this musical spectacular follows 17-year-old Kylie Power, who, upon moving to her father?s hometown of Sydney, is given one last chance to pursue her dream of becoming a synchronised swimming champion.
I like the sound of it, your intention is good. Logline problem's aside, will the producer get all the copyright licenses? Also which songs will be used? Regarding the logline: Use of the word spectacular is a word that 'preaches to the unknowing'. Take it that a producer is one that knows, please rRead more
I like the sound of it, your intention is good.
See lessLogline problem’s aside, will the producer get all the copyright licenses? Also which songs will be used?
Regarding the logline:
Use of the word spectacular is a word that ‘preaches to the unknowing’. Take it that a producer is one that knows, please remove the word. It won’t impress a producer.
The story seems clear enough. Kylie follows the trials and tribulations of becoming a synchronised swimming champion, does she have an opponent throughout? Maybe her coach has doubts? Find someone who could be an antagonist, and promote them.
As the logline reads at the moment, the story tells of her journey, promoting someone to the position of antagonist will give the story balance. As the old addage states, there are two sides to every story.
The Toodyay magistrate hates the name Moondyne Joe; he steals his food giving it to the poor. Ruby loves Joe, the witch Vixana likes Joe. Police long for the day they capture Joe. Good on yer, Moondyne Joe.
Monique Mata, A magistrate is a peron who sits in judgement in a court, (the judge) the Toodyay magistrate is the magistrate in/of the town of Toodyay. The main character is James B. Johns a.k.a. Moondyne Joe. He is the central figure. Who is Ruby? She is his (Moondyne Joe's) lover. Who is Vixana? SRead more
Monique Mata,
A magistrate is a peron who sits in judgement in a court, (the judge) the Toodyay magistrate is the magistrate in/of the town of Toodyay.
The main character is James B. Johns a.k.a. Moondyne Joe. He is the central figure. Who is Ruby? She is his (Moondyne Joe’s) lover.
Who is Vixana? She is a witch.
His evading capture, is this cinematic enough? Like a lot of films it is what happens on the journey that counts.
In Jaws, if the sheriff had killed the shark in the first ten minutes, the film would have flopped, but the tension was kept up so the journey to the sharks death was made to be cinematic.
What country do you come from?
To find out about Moondyne Joe, type his name in the address bar, there are more details about him on the web than I could state. (Even though I live in Toodyay.)
After that, by all means keep scratching your head.
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