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Feeling danger, the Goddess calls the riders of the winged white unicorns to seek humanities threat. Finding the army of Gargoyles, the armies of the Bouicendeni rise, the sound waves of their battle cry are caste at the Gargoyles feet, exploding in the ground the Gargoyles are thrust up into the atmosphere and their deaths.
Logline re-written: TITLE: Waking The Stone Circle. Sensing imminent danger the Goddess calls her Armed Forces. Finding the imminent danger (the army of Gargoyles), all in her Armed Forces rise against them. Causing the ground under the Gargoyles feet to explode they are thrust into the sky, to theiRead more
Logline re-written:
TITLE: Waking The Stone Circle.
Sensing imminent danger the Goddess calls her Armed Forces. Finding the imminent danger (the army of Gargoyles), all in her Armed Forces rise against them.
See lessCausing the ground under the Gargoyles feet to explode they are thrust into the sky, to their deaths.
Distraught that his favourite daughter was captured. King Neptune wanted her back, now he is getting angry, very angry.
sharkeatingman, strangely enough I did think about writing it as screen capture, but changed my mind and wrote it to be normal. I thought the underwater scenes might appear less than good. Thanks for your comments, even though I didn't say so, they are helpful. The antagonist is the guy who finds heRead more
sharkeatingman,
strangely enough I did think about writing it as screen capture, but changed my mind and wrote it to be normal. I thought the underwater scenes might appear less than good. Thanks for your comments, even though I didn’t say so, they are helpful.
The antagonist is the guy who finds her in the net on the fishing trawler, oddly enough his first thoughts are, how much will I get for her.
The protagonists are the humans who help find Aserme.
Karel Segers,
See lessup until,’Now he is getting angry’, is act 1 material, act 2 deals with finding Aserme. Act 3 has what he does when his anger is released.
Distraught that his favourite daughter was captured. King Neptune wanted her back, now he is getting angry, very angry.
Are you saying that a logline has to state who the protagonist is, who the antagomist is? The goal, the inner conflict, the outer conflict, the irony, the hook? MY story has already been written, if you want to write one that is your choice but please don't tell me I've got to add this or that. ThenRead more
Are you saying that a logline has to state who the protagonist is, who the antagomist is? The goal, the inner conflict, the outer conflict, the irony, the hook?
MY story has already been written, if you want to write one that is your choice but please don’t tell me I’ve got to add this or that.
See lessThen you put Genre not clear? The story has Neptune, and mermaids. My attempt at a logline is about mermaids and Neptune. As I wrote, it is fantasy.
Why must I include a scene at the Neptune Society?