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  1. Posted: October 15, 2019In: SciFi

    Borrowed Time

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on October 15, 2019 at 5:29 pm

    Assuming that the system was 100% accurate, would he be just a minor celebrity? Surely if he's the only person to avoid death, his name would be known globally? He'd be the next Jesus!Who set up the system? The government?You said he avoided his fate. Did he simply not die? Or did he actively try anRead more

    Assuming that the system was 100% accurate, would he be just a minor celebrity? Surely if he’s the only person to avoid death, his name would be known globally? He’d be the next Jesus!

    Who set up the system? The government?

    You said he avoided his fate. Did he simply not die? Or did he actively try and avoid death?

    At what point in the story do you see these things happening? Is the him avoiding death the Act I climax? Or is that a MPR?

    Great title btw.?

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  2. Posted: October 11, 2019In: Horror

    Two bitterly-divorced CDC epidemiologists are called to investigate a disease outbreak at a mountain resort and uncover a government conspiracy that they must stop in order to survive.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on October 11, 2019 at 6:16 pm

    Definitely get more of a sense of horror from your amended version. I like that it could draw on previous horror films for inspiration. Have you played the game "The Last of Us"? If not, I highly recommend it. I would still have a single protagonist who acts as the emotional conduit for this story.Read more

    Definitely get more of a sense of horror from your amended version. I like that it could draw on previous horror films for inspiration. Have you played the game “The Last of Us”? If not, I highly recommend it.

    I would still have a single protagonist who acts as the emotional conduit for this story. I quite liked the idea of the two scientists being divorced. It adds an element of humour to the situation and obvious conflict.

    “Must work together” – can you be more specific? What must they work together to do? Find a cure? Escape?

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  3. Posted: October 11, 2019In: Family

    When teenage twins raised on different sides of the track, discover each other, they decide to swap lives temporarily, just to get a taste of what seems a better life but only one wants to return back.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on October 11, 2019 at 6:06 pm

    I think we need to make one of these two the central protagonist, and after the mid-point reversal (MPR - where one of the twins refuses to return to their original home) we need a goal for them. What sets this apart from other body swap films? What's the hook? Family films usually have a more obvioRead more

    I think we need to make one of these two the central protagonist, and after the mid-point reversal (MPR – where one of the twins refuses to return to their original home) we need a goal for them.

    What sets this apart from other body swap films? What’s the hook? Family films usually have a more obvious message so what’s the message you want this film to convey?

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