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A one-armed young man obsesses over becoming an astronaut after a final discussion with his girlfriend, and turns to criminal actions to fulfill his desire after the space agency rejects him.
----After a final discussion with his girlfriend What exactly happens in this discussion? If he's obsessed with being an astronaut, surely that was there before this conversation? I don't see how this conversation has any bearing on the story. ----Turns to criminal actions Like what? What could he aRead more
—-After a final discussion with his girlfriend
What exactly happens in this discussion? If he’s obsessed with being an astronaut, surely that was there before this conversation? I don’t see how this conversation has any bearing on the story.
—-Turns to criminal actions
Like what? What could he actually do that would allow him to actually go into space – something that takes millions of dollars, expertise, manpower, etc, etc. I just don’t see how this could possibly happen.
I struggle to see how your version could work This is based on the logline as it currently stands – if there’s some vital information missing then I’d recommend a rewrite.
Why not make this an empowering film about the power of the human spirit. Rather than resorting to being a criminal, have it so he actually enlists in the astronaut training programme and NASA (because NASA wants to be seen as inclusive – kinda like G.I. Jane) accepts him on the course without any belief that he’ll actually succeed. But he does, with some assistance from some of his fellow recruits and ends up achieving his dream.
Hope this helps.
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I don't understand how this is supposed to be a logline. There is no story.
I don’t understand how this is supposed to be a logline. There is no story.
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This isn?t really a logline. It?s simply setting the stage. We need an individual story within this world to follow ? our protagonist?s story. Check out the formula or give the generator a go ? links at the top. Both of these are really useful resources when it comes to creating a good logline. HopeRead more
This isn?t really a logline. It?s simply setting the stage. We need an individual story within this world to follow ? our protagonist?s story.
Check out the formula or give the generator a go ? links at the top. Both of these are really useful resources when it comes to creating a good logline.
Hope this helps.
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