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  1. Posted: August 26, 2019In: Drama

    A paranoid and neurotic playwright struggling to finish his magnum opus receives mysterious envelopes in the mail containing pages that he hasn’t written yet.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on August 28, 2019 at 5:08 pm

    And then what happens? A lot of your loglines have a really nice premise that I can see working into a good story but they only cover as far as the inciting incident. We NEED to know what happens next. Use the generator to help out with this. It's really easy to use and, even if you don't use the onRead more

    And then what happens?

    A lot of your loglines have a really nice premise that I can see working into a good story but they only cover as far as the inciting incident. We NEED to know what happens next.

    Use the generator to help out with this. It’s really easy to use and, even if you don’t use the one it creates, it helps you to understand all the elements better.

     

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  2. Posted: August 27, 2019In: Comedy

    Three nerdy high-school students time travel back to 1940s Queens in attempt to stop future President of the United States Donald Trump from being born.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on August 28, 2019 at 1:16 am

    I take it your taking a Back to the Future approach to time travel, rather than an Endgame approach? Why Donald Trump? Why not Hitler? I also think that the real story is potentially what happens after they achieve this. The stopping of his birth is merely the inciting incident. This is obviously veRead more

    I take it your taking a Back to the Future approach to time travel, rather than an Endgame approach?

    Why Donald Trump? Why not Hitler?

    I also think that the real story is potentially what happens after they achieve this. The stopping of his birth is merely the inciting incident. This is obviously very dependant on the story you’re trying to tell and why.

     

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  3. Posted: August 23, 2019In: Thriller

    A na?ve but gifted young paralegal working late finds herself trapped in an empty giant parking garage and must defend herself against the shadowy contract killer hired to kill her.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on August 24, 2019 at 12:00 am

    Why is the fact that she's a paralegal relevant? Or the fact that she's gifted? Or naive for that matter? These things should give me some clue as to why someone would go to the length of hiring an assassin to kill her. Or at least suggest how she is going to be able to survive this encounter. SurelRead more

    Why is the fact that she’s a paralegal relevant? Or the fact that she’s gifted? Or naive for that matter? These things should give me some clue as to why someone would go to the length of hiring an assassin to kill her. Or at least suggest how she is going to be able to survive this encounter.

    Surely, a contract killer would just shoot her from a distance? This is what they does for a living right? She’s just a naive paralegal… so how is she supposed to defend herself against someone who kills people like this every day?

    Is this for a feature length or a short? At the moment I’m struggling to see this sustaining a 90mins+ runtime.

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