1. Posted: June 14, 2019In:

    In a dystopian right wing world. A terrorist group is planting boxes holding either cash or explosives, opening it makes you rich or dead. A poor man and his friend find one and try to figure out what to do.

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    Mike Pedley Singularity

    Get rich or die trying.

    Get rich or die trying.

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  2. Posted: June 14, 2019In:

    When a taser-slinging HOA president threatens to harm her pooch, a mom stages a coup to take him down ? during the neighborhood?s ladies-only Bunco Night. (25 words)

    Mike Pedley Singularity

    Why only threaten? Why not go all out and have him actually taser the dog? Reverse Save the Cat moment = instant villain! Not sure you need the "during the neighbourhood's...." line at the end. When the vile HOA President tasers her dog, a shy soccer mom stages a coup to take him down. (19 words)Read more

    Why only threaten? Why not go all out and have him actually taser the dog? Reverse Save the Cat moment = instant villain!

    Not sure you need the “during the neighbourhood’s….” line at the end.

    When the vile HOA President tasers her dog, a shy soccer mom stages a coup to take him down. (19 words)

     

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  3. Posted: June 14, 2019In:

    After years of watching from the wings, a determined young artist sets out to make her place on the world?s stage..

    Mike Pedley Singularity

    Richiev's feedback is spot on. The word "wallflower" is great because it instantly encompasses pretty much everything you need to know about her. There needs to be one specific incident that kick starts this story and that needs to set up a specific visual goal.

    Richiev’s feedback is spot on. The word “wallflower” is great because it instantly encompasses pretty much everything you need to know about her.

    There needs to be one specific incident that kick starts this story and that needs to set up a specific visual goal.

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