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An arrogant crime scene cleaner and her impressionable partner/best friend begin a messy murder spree to provide the work that’ll save their business from going under.
Whoever owns the property or a relative of the deceased. This is influenced by a friend who has recently spent a lot of money on a specialist cleaning company to come in and clean up a fairly horrific situation when her stepfather passed away.
Whoever owns the property or a relative of the deceased. This is influenced by a friend who has recently spent a lot of money on a specialist cleaning company to come in and clean up a fairly horrific situation when her stepfather passed away.
See lessA plus size woman competes with her sexy, gold-digger friend for the man of her dreams.
Totally agree, but I feel like the wording is a bit off. If you wanted to highlight specifically body shape, her friend should potentially be characterised as "skinny" or "average". The antagonist is usually at odds with the protagonist so this would make more sense. I feel like all of this is somewRead more
Totally agree, but I feel like the wording is a bit off. If you wanted to highlight specifically body shape, her friend should potentially be characterised as “skinny” or “average”. The antagonist is usually at odds with the protagonist so this would make more sense.
I feel like all of this is somewhat redundant though, when the decision is neither the protagonist’s or her rival’s. I’m pretty sure his decision wouldn’t solely be based on appearances alone. If he doesn’t want to be with either of them, there’s no story.
See lessOn the eve of Pearl Harbor, a plucky and indomitable crop duster fights to become the first female fighter pilot in the Army Air Corps.
Does the whole plot take place on the night before Pearl Harbour? Given that her fight to become the first female fighter pilot probably takes longer than one evening, I'm assuming not. Is this based on a true story? If so, I would strongly suggest adding "Based on the true story of a plucky..." andRead more
Does the whole plot take place on the night before Pearl Harbour? Given that her fight to become the first female fighter pilot probably takes longer than one evening, I’m assuming not.
Is this based on a true story? If so, I would strongly suggest adding “Based on the true story of a plucky…” and I would consider making the bit about Pearl Harbour the button on the logline. I guess it depends whether you show the attack on Pearl Harbour. I would probably suggest not since it’s been shown on film quite a few times already and I actually think ending the film with her happy in the knowledge that she’s achieved the unachievable… then the warning sirens sound.
I would consider having her as just “plucky” or just “indomitable” (although I would change this to “strong-willed” or similar… it’s a bit more accessible) as I’m not sure you need both. I would go with “strong-willed” personally, fwiw.
I like this. I really hope it is a true story as that would add a lot of weight to the logline. Interested to see your answers to my questions.
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