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  1. Posted: January 11, 2020In: Drama

    A famous singer with everything to lose and the car accident and subsequent trauma threaten her career, then she found her love and wants to make a comeback by doing a hit song again.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on January 11, 2020 at 8:04 pm

    As Lotcher has pointed out, she has no goal, and as she?s only aspiring, she has nothing to lose. Maybe make her a famous singer with everything to lose and the car accident and subsequent trauma threaten her career. Her goal then is to be back on top with a number one song again. Just an idea.

    As Lotcher has pointed out, she has no goal, and as she?s only aspiring, she has nothing to lose. Maybe make her a famous singer with everything to lose and the car accident and subsequent trauma threaten her career. Her goal then is to be back on top with a number one song again. Just an idea.

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  2. Posted: January 10, 2020In: Thriller

    After his father’s death, a young man with autism discovers an experimental drug to help him cope with the murder of his classmate.

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    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on January 11, 2020 at 2:00 am

    Young man - how old? How is his life turned upside down? How does this drug help him cope? Film is a visual medium so think visually. What will we be seeing on screen? I think your previous logline was more interesting. The idea of a autistic kid investigating a high-school murder had legs. I wouldRead more

    Young man – how old?

    How is his life turned upside down?

    How does this drug help him cope?

    Film is a visual medium so think visually. What will we be seeing on screen?

    I think your previous logline was more interesting. The idea of a autistic kid investigating a high-school murder had legs. I would pursue that one.

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  3. Posted: January 10, 2020In: Romance

    A thirty-something manchild, desperate to get his recently-dumped best friend laid, takes him to a party where his friend falls for a woman who only wants sex, whilst he falls in love for the first time… with his friend’s ex-fiance.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on January 10, 2020 at 8:29 pm

    Definitely something in this idea. However, surely this guy has met his best friend's fianc? before? The way this is worded makes it sound like this guy falls in love with his best friend's ex-fiance at the party. Is that right? I'm not sure including the bit about his friend falls for a woman who oRead more

    Definitely something in this idea. However, surely this guy has met his best friend’s fianc? before? The way this is worded makes it sound like this guy falls in love with his best friend’s ex-fiance at the party. Is that right?

    I’m not sure including the bit about his friend falls for a woman who only wants sex is necessary. That seems like the B-story to me.

    When he falls in love for the first time with his best friend’s ex, a thirty-something man-child must find a new girlfriend for his recently dumped amigo before he can follow his heart.?

     

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