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  1. Posted: April 5, 2013In: Public

    When a space colony team land on a habitable planet, they discover a buried alien race and an object that threatens the fate of their lives – and the earth.

    mmckean
    Added an answer on April 5, 2013 at 4:20 am

    Cool. Sounds like a film that I would like to see. The only critique I could think of is to possibly mention something about the protagonist(s).

    Cool. Sounds like a film that I would like to see. The only critique I could think of is to possibly mention something about the protagonist(s).

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  2. Posted: April 4, 2013In: Public

    When a government Space station is taken over by a terrorist organisation, its paper pushing engineer must escape to help protect both his wife and national security

    mmckean
    Added an answer on April 5, 2013 at 4:18 am

    Sounds like a pretty interesting idea. I find it odd that an engineer could be a paper pusher though. When I think of engineer I think of someone doing the work and fixing and designing machinery. I think the part about the terrorists taking over the space station sounds interesting though. It makesRead more

    Sounds like a pretty interesting idea. I find it odd that an engineer could be a paper pusher though. When I think of engineer I think of someone doing the work and fixing and designing machinery. I think the part about the terrorists taking over the space station sounds interesting though. It makes me wonder why terrorists would be interested in a space station.

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  3. Posted: April 3, 2013In: Public

    Mauled by a rabid dog, a truck driver stumbles down the road to a nearby trailer park and begs for help. But when the residents refuse to come to his aide his condition worsens and he becomes a ruthless killer.

    mmckean
    Added an answer on April 4, 2013 at 2:01 am

    Hey Richiev and Kriss, Thanks for the suggestions. I wasn?t actually intending to tell the story from the killer?s POV so your comments have proved helpful in making me think of another way to do this logline. Perhaps, something along the lines of: When the residents of a trailer park refuse to helpRead more

    Hey Richiev and Kriss,

    Thanks for the suggestions. I wasn?t actually intending to tell the story from the killer?s POV so your comments have proved helpful in making me think of another way to do this logline.

    Perhaps, something along the lines of:

    When the residents of a trailer park refuse to help a rabies victim his condition worsens and he becomes a ruthless killer. Now they must stop him before the virus spreads.?

    There will be multiple protagonists in this movie and one semi main character. The characters goal will be to stop this killer before the virus spreads throughout the trailer park infecting the protagonists friends and family.

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