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  1. Posted: April 2, 2013In: Public

    A contestant on the Bachelor-esque show "Token of Love" hatches a plot to win the secret million dollar prize with the help of the show's cynical host.

    mmckean
    Added an answer on April 3, 2013 at 4:55 am

    A lot of potential in this idea. I think it would be more interesting if the host tried to help them win though instead of stealing, which is what it sounds like they are planning.

    A lot of potential in this idea. I think it would be more interesting if the host tried to help them win though instead of stealing, which is what it sounds like they are planning.

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  2. Posted: March 30, 2013In: Student Loglines

    After a troubled teen girl is caught vandalizing state property, she is ordered to spend 6 months in juvenile detention center; where she falls in love with the, married, faculty art teacher.

    mmckean
    Added an answer on April 3, 2013 at 4:52 am

    Intriguing start, but I agree with the others. We need to have some sort of conflict.

    Intriguing start, but I agree with the others. We need to have some sort of conflict.

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  3. Posted: April 2, 2013In: Public

    When an acerbic alcoholic finds himself penniless and alone he has no choice but to crash his family?s holiday. Years of alienating them makes for a stiff challenge, but eventually he subtly helps them heal.

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    Added an answer on April 3, 2013 at 4:49 am

    I agree with the other comments here, but I would also take out acerbic. When writing a log line you want to use words that are so common people have no trouble knowing their meaning because these little snippets are for the general public. I have a pretty broad vocabulary myself but even I had to lRead more

    I agree with the other comments here, but I would also take out acerbic. When writing a log line you want to use words that are so common people have no trouble knowing their meaning because these little snippets are for the general public. I have a pretty broad vocabulary myself but even I had to look up what acerbic meant. If I don’t know, then other people wont either. Keep it simple.

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