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A former gang member, now an undercover cop, travels through a dangerous inner-city labyrinth to kill a notorious gang leader. Boyz n the Hood meets Apocalypse Now.
Seems like it needs more. What makes this story unique? What makes it stand out from every other crime drama with gang members turned cops? A former gang member chasing a gang leader is interesting but it needs to be more of a hook. Maybe the notorious gang leader was the undercover cops mentor...seRead more
Seems like it needs more. What makes this story unique? What makes it stand out from every other crime drama with gang members turned cops? A former gang member chasing a gang leader is interesting but it needs to be more of a hook. Maybe the notorious gang leader was the undercover cops mentor…see how that situation would make it more complicated and give it more of a hook? Its good as it is…just could use a little more.
See lessWith armageddon approaching, a museum security guard with a background in psychology must destroy the Egyptian god of chaos, who is disguising himself as various museum employees while committing a grisly string of murders.
Here is another version: "With armageddon approaching, a security guard with a background in forensic psychology must destroy the egyptian god of chaos, who is brutally murdering people at a local museum."
Here is another version: “With armageddon approaching, a security guard with a background in forensic psychology must destroy the egyptian god of chaos, who is brutally murdering people at a local museum.”
See lessWhen a biochemical corporation manufactures implants that help millions live longer, they go from pariah to savior. But a longstanding critic remains unconvinced, and must battle the corporation and its backers to uncover the shocking secret behind the technology.
This sounds really good. It needs to have a little more conflict though. What stands in his way? Just investigating a biochemical company is interesting but you have to make it interesting enough for people to pay money to see it.
This sounds really good. It needs to have a little more conflict though. What stands in his way? Just investigating a biochemical company is interesting but you have to make it interesting enough for people to pay money to see it.
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