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  1. Posted: March 11, 2013In: Public

    In a distant future ravaged by war, a secret society stages a fake alien invasion in order to unite the world's warring factions.

    mmckean
    Added an answer on March 12, 2013 at 9:46 am

    I do see where timmyelliot is coming from though. Maybe a few more little details about the pro tag would make it even better. But the premise it there and I like it

    I do see where timmyelliot is coming from though. Maybe a few more little details about the pro tag would make it even better. But the premise it there and I like it

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  2. Posted: March 11, 2013In: Public

    In a distant future ravaged by war, a secret society stages a fake alien invasion in order to unite the world's warring factions.

    mmckean
    Added an answer on March 12, 2013 at 9:44 am

    Sounds really cool. Leave it like it is and submit it to a few production places in the form of a query letter :)

    Sounds really cool. Leave it like it is and submit it to a few production places in the form of a query letter 🙂

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  3. Posted: March 12, 2013In: Public

    To overcome her performance anxiety, a renowned classical pianist pursues an anonymous affair with a man who is sharply skilled at erotic knife-play.

    mmckean
    Added an answer on March 12, 2013 at 9:42 am

    I love the word choice. "sharply skilled at erotic knife-play" is a witty pun. Not sure I understand why a pianist would have an affair with someone just to ease her performance anxiety. Unless the performance anxiety is performance in the bedroom and not performance as it comes to playing the pianoRead more

    I love the word choice. “sharply skilled at erotic knife-play” is a witty pun. Not sure I understand why a pianist would have an affair with someone just to ease her performance anxiety. Unless the performance anxiety is performance in the bedroom and not performance as it comes to playing the piano. If this is the case though, it doesn’t need to be included that she is a renowned pianist.

    Just some thoughts. Take it or leave it 🙂

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