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When witch curses her fiance, courageous bride learns the true purpose of the wedding – being sacrificed to pagan god. Now she must find the way how to avoid his wrath. Version 3
There are several errors in this logline. First, there seems to be something missing between "when" and "witch." It should say "when a witch curses her fianc?, a courageous bride learns the true purpose of the wedding -- being sacrificed to a pagan god. Now she must find a way to avoid his wrath." MRead more
There are several errors in this logline. First, there seems to be something missing between “when” and “witch.” It should say “when a witch curses her fianc?, a courageous bride learns the true purpose of the wedding — being sacrificed to a pagan god. Now she must find a way to avoid his wrath.” Most of the errors are grammatical. The logline itself is kind of confusing though because I fail to see how a witch cursing a brides fianc? could lead to being sacrificed to a pagan god. Its good for a logline to make you ask questions but the questions have to make you want to read the story and not just confuse you. Keep working at it 🙂
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