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  1. Posted: February 13, 2013In: Public

    After her man is taken hostage in a botched drugs heist his needy gangland girlfriend must unravel the truth behind what went down if either of them are to make it out alive.

    mmckean
    Added an answer on February 13, 2013 at 7:50 am

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  2. Posted: February 13, 2013In: Public

    After her man is taken hostage in a botched drugs heist his needy gangland girlfriend must unravel the truth behind what went down if either of them are to make it out alive.

    mmckean
    Added an answer on February 13, 2013 at 7:50 am

    A huge step in the right direction. In order to avoid the whole him and her problem maybe you could write the man's name in there, especially if he is the man character.

    A huge step in the right direction. In order to avoid the whole him and her problem maybe you could write the man’s name in there, especially if he is the man character.

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  3. Posted: February 13, 2013In: Public

    A scientist and her group find a new element on archaeological excavations at an earth like planet making the group obsessed and killing each other but she pulls against her hallucinations and her group in order to get the element aboard the scientific base.

    mmckean
    Added an answer on February 13, 2013 at 7:44 am

    This is a good idea, very high concept. I've also noticed that you have revised it since this post too and I like the revision as well. Well done.

    This is a good idea, very high concept. I’ve also noticed that you have revised it since this post too and I like the revision as well. Well done.

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