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  1. Posted: May 23, 2012In: Public

    Moles. Eat Worms.

    fejumas
    Added an answer on May 25, 2012 at 2:16 am

    Um, same here. It's more of an action line in the script than a logline.

    Um, same here. It’s more of an action line in the script than a logline.

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  2. Posted: April 24, 2012In: Public

    An awkward 16-year old, who discovers that she has developed super-strength, must harness and control her new power while evading a covert agency eager to exploit her.

    fejumas
    Added an answer on April 24, 2012 at 11:44 pm

    Damn, Geno. You're a tough taskmaster :/ And no, there is no global domination to be found. Only a pinch of eugenics, a dash of genetic manipulation and a sprinkling of the reluctant hero(ine).

    Damn, Geno. You’re a tough taskmaster :/

    And no, there is no global domination to be found. Only a pinch of eugenics, a dash of genetic manipulation and a sprinkling of the reluctant hero(ine).

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  3. Posted: April 20, 2012In: Public

    Masters of Purgatory

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    Added an answer on April 24, 2012 at 10:54 am

    It's best to leave out protag names. Are they angels? What are they trying to achieve? I assume God is the antagonist. How is he keeping them from achieving their goal? I can't even offer an alternative logline because you don't provide enough information about your story. Like jamesmichael says, itRead more

    It’s best to leave out protag names. Are they angels? What are they trying to achieve? I assume God is the antagonist. How is he keeping them from achieving their goal?

    I can’t even offer an alternative logline because you don’t provide enough information about your story. Like jamesmichael says, it’s read more like a tagline, albeit a little long. The hint of a story is intriguing to me though. I’d be interested when you come up with an updated logline.

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