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Based on the young adult CHERUB novels; Two young agents are sent to New Zealand to help bring a gang leader behind bars.
Question: is your script loosely inspired by the Cherub novels or a straight adaptation? In any case, I'm sure you're aware of the copyright implications.
Question: is your script loosely inspired by the Cherub novels or a straight adaptation? In any case, I’m sure you’re aware of the copyright implications.
See lessA slacker guardian angel has three days to get his human assignment to fall in love, or the angel will spend eternity in hell.
Pretty good logline - it has goal, stakes, urgency. Nice job! Personally, I would maybe like a hint if the angel has to make his human fall in love with anyone specific or just in general. Have you seen A Life Less Ordinary? This reminds me a little of it. Might be worth checking it out.
Pretty good logline – it has goal, stakes, urgency. Nice job! Personally, I would maybe like a hint if the angel has to make his human fall in love with anyone specific or just in general.
Have you seen A Life Less Ordinary? This reminds me a little of it. Might be worth checking it out.
See less\"A withdrawn, abused and bullied teenager, does well to keep his various and at times genius talents well hidden from his tormentors. A chance meeting with a drifter however, changes everything.\"
I'm intrigued but the logline is way too vague. If you want to push the reader from "intrigued" to "I want to read that script", you have to be more specific and less coy - What's the teenager's genius talents? And why does he have to hide it from his tormentors? And how does the drifter fit in? WouRead more
I’m intrigued but the logline is way too vague.
If you want to push the reader from “intrigued” to “I want to read that script”, you have to be more specific and less coy – What’s the teenager’s genius talents? And why does he have to hide it from his tormentors? And how does the drifter fit in?
Would love to see what your revised logline looks like…
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