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  1. Posted: November 2, 2017In: Fantasy

    When an exiled prince unexpectedly becomes ruler in a foreign kingdom, he must make dangerous alliances if he is to survive the vampire Emperor who murdered his parents.

    moviefreak81 Samurai
    Added an answer on November 5, 2017 at 9:53 am

    Agreed? but which version do you think is closer? To a sort of decent version, I mean...

    Agreed? but which version do you think is closer? To a sort of decent version, I mean…

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  2. Posted: November 2, 2017In: Fantasy

    When an exiled prince unexpectedly becomes ruler in a foreign kingdom, he must make dangerous alliances if he is to survive the vampire Emperor who murdered his parents.

    moviefreak81 Samurai
    Added an answer on November 5, 2017 at 9:45 am

    Agreed... but which version do you think is closer?

    Agreed… but which version do you think is closer?

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  3. Posted: November 2, 2017In: Fantasy

    When an exiled prince unexpectedly becomes ruler in a foreign kingdom, he must make dangerous alliances if he is to survive the vampire Emperor who murdered his parents.

    moviefreak81 Samurai
    Added an answer on November 5, 2017 at 5:54 am

    I see. I assume in this case, the ultimate destiny would fall off the scope of first arc, but could be amended at the end: ?When an exiled prince unexpectedly becomes ruler in a foreign kingdom, he must marry a trecherous king?s daughter if he is to survive the vampire emperor who murdered his parenRead more

    I see. I assume in this case, the ultimate destiny would fall off the scope of first arc, but could be amended at the end:

    ?When an exiled prince unexpectedly becomes ruler in a foreign kingdom, he must marry a trecherous king?s daughter if he is to survive the vampire emperor who murdered his parents and reclaim his throne.? (ultimate goal added)

    ?When an exiled prince unexpectedly becomes ruler in a foreign kingdom, he must marry a trecherous king?s daughter if he is to reclaim his throne or die in the hands of the vampire emperor who murdered his parents.? (variation for long arc+stakes)

    Hmm… this one is tricky…

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