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When an exiled prince unexpectedly becomes ruler in a foreign kingdom, he must make dangerous alliances if he is to survive the vampire Emperor who murdered his parents.
these 3 things: 1)Discovery about the past. 2)Debate about leaving (don't want to leave adoptive parents behind) 3)Someone is poisoned, debate is over: An assassin is on his track so if he stay, likely to be killed.
these 3 things:
See less1)Discovery about the past.
2)Debate about leaving (don’t want to leave adoptive parents behind)
3)Someone is poisoned, debate is over: An assassin is on his track so if he stay, likely to be killed.
When an exiled prince unexpectedly becomes ruler in a foreign kingdom, he must make dangerous alliances if he is to survive the vampire Emperor who murdered his parents.
This would a series logline, so a logline for a first arc.? This logline is an effort to capture the main conflict without bloating the sentence. The order of events could be: 1)He discovers he is an exiled prince and is hunted (was hidden by a relative since baby). This could be the inciting incideRead more
This would a series logline, so a logline for a first arc.? This logline is an effort to capture the main conflict without bloating the sentence. The order of events could be:
1)He discovers he is an exiled prince and is hunted (was hidden by a relative since baby). This could be the inciting incident for the whole arc, it would inflate the words.
2)He (and the scout) are arrested and sentenced in a foreign land. When he cleverly defeat the executioneer/champion/ruler in the arena, he is chosen to be the new ruler.
3)News spread to antagonist. At this point you could say the ultimate goal for the young man is to avenge his parents and stay alive.
However at the current situation for first arc, an alliance is necessary to barely resist any attack, let alone re-conquer his throne. This reflects my choice of leaving the inciting incident to becoming ruler and what he must do (marry the king’s daughter).
Thanks dpg, any comment is appreciated.
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