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  1. Posted: September 3, 2015In: Public

    When a habitual liar forges the paperwork to establish a rural family practice, she soon finds herself in a blood-soaked examining room, trying to silence the screams of her poorly anesthetized patients.

    mrliteral Samurai
    Added an answer on September 5, 2015 at 7:39 pm

    This sounds like it's ten pages long, and doesn't make any sense. If she wants to pretend to be a doctor why do it in an area of so few patients who likely don't have money or insurance? What was her reason for going there? Is she hiding from trouble she got into somewhere else? And if she knows sheRead more

    This sounds like it’s ten pages long, and doesn’t make any sense. If she wants to pretend to be a doctor why do it in an area of so few patients who likely don’t have money or insurance? What was her reason for going there? Is she hiding from trouble she got into somewhere else? And if she knows she can’t actually get away with claiming to be a doctor when she doesn’t know what she’s doing, why would she pick that? Why not go into something where she can bluff her way through? And I myself am no doctor but I’m pretty sure an exam room is for examining patients, not anesthetizing or bleeding them…

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  2. Posted: September 2, 2015In: Public

    When a billionaire discovers the Garden of Eden, two Biblical revisionists set out to debunk him, until they learn it might be the fountain of youth.

    mrliteral Samurai
    Added an answer on September 2, 2015 at 8:21 am

    So who's the protagonist here?

    So who’s the protagonist here?

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  3. Posted: August 27, 2015In: Public

    An art forgery expert is set on an involuntary adventure that promises to solve an old crime and reveal the secret of her vanished family, all this after a mysterious man delivers an unusual package to her apartment.

    mrliteral Samurai
    Added an answer on August 27, 2015 at 8:41 am

    You've made the logline about as vague as possible: adventure, crime, secret, vanishing, mysterious, unusual?yeah but what actually happens? What makes this interesting?

    You’ve made the logline about as vague as possible: adventure, crime, secret, vanishing, mysterious, unusual?yeah but what actually happens? What makes this interesting?

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