1. Posted: July 27, 2015In:

    When her agent drops her, a shy ?love story? author attends a horror movie workshop where screenwriters are kept prisoner by a perverse guru who makes them die like their characters, so that only the best writer will survive.

    mrliteral Samurai

    This is starting to sound more and more like Chuck Palahniuk's "Haunted" except I'm not seeing anyone's motivation here.

    This is starting to sound more and more like Chuck Palahniuk’s “Haunted” except I’m not seeing anyone’s motivation here.

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  2. Posted: July 27, 2015In:

    Twenty years after the horrific slaying of a family, terrified townsfolk wait in fear for the imminent return of the menacing monster that was put away for the crime.

    mrliteral Samurai

    Is this a person or an actual monster? You've said "monster" so many times I'm picturing Henry J Waternoose barreling down main street...

    Is this a person or an actual monster? You’ve said “monster” so many times I’m picturing Henry J Waternoose barreling down main street…

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  3. Posted: July 28, 2015In:

    When political and selfish interests become top priorities,other events are secondary including family and love.In a situation where love gets entangled in the midst of it,what happens?

    mrliteral Samurai

    Why are there no spaces after punctuation?

    Why are there no spaces after punctuation?

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