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  1. Posted: September 12, 2013In: Public

    An unimaginative accountant who hates musicals is transported to an alternate universe where everybody sing and dance. He struggles to return to his own universe before he succumbs to the compulsion of joining in.

    Adam Bernstr?m Samurai
    Added an answer on September 14, 2013 at 10:26 am

    I see your point, about the date seeming a bit too manipulative by sending the accountant to the alternate universe. I'm considering other ways he might be transported to the other universe, than the date doing it. I do have more of the bigger picture, but I haven't locked anything down... not muchRead more

    I see your point, about the date seeming a bit too manipulative by sending the accountant to the alternate universe.

    I’m considering other ways he might be transported to the other universe, than the date doing it.

    I do have more of the bigger picture, but I haven’t locked anything down… not much anyway. I might try to do a beat sheet for it soon, though.

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  2. Posted: September 12, 2013In: Public

    An unimaginative accountant who hates musicals is transported to an alternate universe where everybody sing and dance. He struggles to return to his own universe before he succumbs to the compulsion of joining in.

    Adam Bernstr?m Samurai
    Added an answer on September 14, 2013 at 6:51 am

    That reply was supposed to be a direct reply to wilsondownunder's comment.

    That reply was supposed to be a direct reply to wilsondownunder’s comment.

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  3. Posted: September 12, 2013In: Public

    An unimaginative accountant who hates musicals is transported to an alternate universe where everybody sing and dance. He struggles to return to his own universe before he succumbs to the compulsion of joining in.

    Adam Bernstr?m Samurai
    Added an answer on September 14, 2013 at 6:49 am

    Except the storm in Groundhog Day only happens later, and keeps them in that little town. It isn't the cause of everything happening over and over again. I'm not too keen on the idea of a storm being involved in my story either. The idea is that it will still be New York, and almost everything willRead more

    Except the storm in Groundhog Day only happens later, and keeps them in that little town. It isn’t the cause of everything happening over and over again.

    I’m not too keen on the idea of a storm being involved in my story either.

    The idea is that it will still be New York, and almost everything will look the same at first. The accountant might not even notice any difference at first until people start bursting into song around him at the oddest moments, and he keeps walking in on showstoppers.

    I’m keeping an open mind, or at least try to. (Unlike my protagonist)

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