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After allied bombing accidentally destroys her safehouse, a jew joins the dutch resistance, only to face a series of deception
The web needs to be described better. What is the specific nature of this web, what's her major problem and what specifically must she do? What's her goal?
The web needs to be described better. What is the specific nature of this web, what’s her major problem and what specifically must she do?
What’s her goal?
See lessThe true story of how a notorious Jewish counterfeiter saved his life by cooperating with the Nazis in the largest counterfeiting scheme in history.
I dunno... Being put in a concentration camp is a VERY BIG event in one's life, especially for a Jew during the Third Reich. I and millions of other people would find the act of being thrown into a concentration camp mighty hooky. If you don't specify this, you undermine its importance when comparedRead more
I dunno…
Being put in a concentration camp is a VERY BIG event in one’s life, especially for a Jew during the Third Reich.
I and millions of other people would find the act of being thrown into a concentration camp mighty hooky. If you don’t specify this, you undermine its importance when compared to the other story elements – not only are you coming across as callous with respect to the subject matter at hand but also you’re neglecting to specify the immense obstacle the MC faces – why do that? Obstacles and stakes make a story interesting, even if they’re obvious parts of a story you’d do best to mention them in the logline.
Not many Jews made it out alive, a true story about a Jew who did, regardless the method, is interesting. Needless to say, this guy’s particular story has its own twist on Holocaust survival and as a result an amplified interest in the story. That’s why the logline would read better if you mentioned what he did, why and under what specific circumstance.
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See lessAfter being thrown into a concentration camp, a notorious Jewish counterfeiter saved his life by cooperating with the Nazis in the largest counterfeiting scheme in history.
When a military-trained biologist’s husband unexpectedly returns alive from a secret mission, she must go on a quest to a mysterious lighthouse to save his life – and the world.
What is it about his return that motivates her to go to the lighthouse? I think that's the key to the story as it illustrates her emotional and personal stake.
What is it about his return that motivates her to go to the lighthouse? I think that’s the key to the story as it illustrates her emotional and personal stake.
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