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  1. Posted: January 2, 2018In: Horror

    “The Wedding Killer” In small town of Delaware The young police officer investigating , a case of murder in brides one day before their wedding day

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    Added an answer on January 2, 2018 at 5:11 pm

    This sounds like an episode of any generic police procedural - a crime takes place, a pattern emerges, the police officer main character catches the bad guy/gal. The police officer is just doing his or her job, what is it about this particular serial killer and police officer combo that makes this iRead more

    This sounds like an episode of any generic police procedural – a crime takes place, a pattern emerges, the police officer main character catches the bad guy/gal.

    The police officer is just doing his or her job, what is it about this particular serial killer and police officer combo that makes this investigation so interesting/unique?

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  2. Posted: December 20, 2017In: Comedy

    ?tittle:______ ? ? ? ?”The black?chines s” The black america rapper and ?university?student ?went?to ?china rural area with his?chines?girl?friend?and class mate ?in summer?break?straggle?to?adapt?culture and discept with her family and community and her?chine’s?ex boy?friend

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    Added an answer on January 2, 2018 at 5:07 pm

    Richiev's version works well - I can see a plot from reading it as there will likely be multiple obstacles on his way to father approval each with its own unique culture clash and dramatic stake. That said if you had one big thing he had to do to get dear old dad's approval it would help focus the pRead more

    Richiev’s version works well – I can see a plot from reading it as there will likely be multiple obstacles on his way to father approval each with its own unique culture clash and dramatic stake. That said if you had one big thing he had to do to get dear old dad’s approval it would help focus the plot. What if he had to master Chines opera or Kung Fu or traditional Chinese painting?

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  3. Posted: December 26, 2017In: Crime

    pls comment on it

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    Added an answer on January 2, 2018 at 4:59 pm

    Anti-heroes are tough, when done well they're great because they're rare but otherwise, more often than not, they fail to engage an audience. You would have to work extra hard to set up an otherwise hopeless situation so that his crime is seen, by the audience, as doing the wrong thing for the rightRead more

    Anti-heroes are tough, when done well they’re great because they’re rare but otherwise, more often than not, they fail to engage an audience.

    You would have to work extra hard to set up an otherwise hopeless situation so that his crime is seen, by the audience, as doing the wrong thing for the right reason. I should know, just finished directing a short I wrote about a guy doing the wrong thing for the right reasons.

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