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When a group of argonauts go missing during the California Gold Rush, a solitary hunter must lead a relief party to the claim where a dangerous beast guards a vast fortune.
Agreed with DPG.Also, is the hunter aware of the beast before heading out on the expedition or is he unaware of the danger ahead?Seeing as he is the main character, I suggest he is made aware of the beast, the choice to go after it will be harder to make. I would go as far as to say that he has knowRead more
Agreed with DPG.
Also, is the hunter aware of the beast before heading out on the expedition or is he unaware of the danger ahead?
Seeing as he is the main character, I suggest he is made aware of the beast, the choice to go after it will be harder to make. I would go as far as to say that he has known of the beast for years prior to the incident and has been waiting for an opportunity to go after it. The logline should focus on the hunter’s perspective and motivation and less on the miners.
See lessWhen allegations prompt a rising Senior to permanently leave home, he must feign loyalty to a commune that hides him so he can attain residency there and take his GED.
What are these allegations? Why would they force him to leave the home? Wouldn't his goal be to prove the allegations wrong, if so, why is his goal to take the GED?
What are these allegations? Why would they force him to leave the home? Wouldn’t his goal be to prove the allegations wrong, if so, why is his goal to take the GED?
See lessA disillusioned crusader returns home to find wife in danger of losing her soul.
Agreed with Richiev and DPG. What starts him off on his journey - What event makes him realise that the wife's soul is in danger? Then, as a result of that, what must he do to save her? These are the most important bits of information your logline needs to communicate, but as it is now, they are gloRead more
Agreed with Richiev and DPG.
What starts him off on his journey – What event makes him realise that the wife’s soul is in danger? Then, as a result of that, what must he do to save her?
These are the most important bits of information your logline needs to communicate, but as it is now, they are glossed over with no detail.
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