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  1. Posted: September 3, 2017In: Drama

    When a star-struck young buck is forced to hide out in an off-grid commune to evade the police, using the identity he constructed to attain his anonymity allows him to win over the group, who decides to make him their new leader, even after he confesses to a past crime.

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    Added an answer on September 4, 2017 at 10:38 pm

    Agreed with DPG. Also, what does "...star-struck young buck..." mean?

    Agreed with DPG.

    Also, what does “…star-struck young buck…” mean?

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  2. Posted: August 23, 2017In: Adventure

    The naive daughter of the police chief gets a taste of criminal life after using her father?s car to sneak out and setting out to steal it back from car thieves before he or any other cop finds out.

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    Added an answer on August 24, 2017 at 1:51 pm

    Agreed with Richiev, the wording is standing in the way of clarity. Are the stakes her father losing his beloved car or her coping the blame for the car being stolen?

    Agreed with Richiev, the wording is standing in the way of clarity.

    Are the stakes her father losing his beloved car or her coping the blame for the car being stolen?

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  3. Posted: August 23, 2017In: Romance

    When an aspiring writer blogs anonymously about her dates, one of them finds out who she is and continues dating her in order to improve his dating style to ask out someone else.

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    Added an answer on August 24, 2017 at 1:49 pm

    This kind of sounds like all single men - go out with one woman, if it doesn't go well try try again... What is the 'hook'? What about this stands out from the large number of other romance stories? Not sure how his actions make an audience want to go see the movie at home or the theater. Sorry forRead more

    This kind of sounds like all single men – go out with one woman, if it doesn’t go well try try again…

    What is the ‘hook’? What about this stands out from the large number of other romance stories?

    Not sure how his actions make an audience want to go see the movie at home or the theater.

    Sorry for the negativity, simply being totally honest.

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