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Terrified of his parents suspicions, a freshly outed gay high school senior must get a girlfriend so his parents will think he is straight.
I'm not convinced this will work - not today, not in the west. There is so much already dealing with LGBT subject matter that for a script to stand out (enough to catch a producer's attention) it would need to present seriously high stakes and or be based on a real story. This sounds like very low sRead more
I’m not convinced this will work – not today, not in the west.
There is so much already dealing with LGBT subject matter that for a script to stand out (enough to catch a producer’s attention) it would need to present seriously high stakes and or be based on a real story. This sounds like very low stakes and rather pedestrian. Coming out as gay in 2017 – no big deal. This is, unless, the MC lives in a very strict community of people who would react to him being gay – evangelical Christians, Muslims or neo nazis.
Even then I struggle to see how this is a story worthy problem and one that we haven’t seen oh so many times before. I think you need to find a specific plot device that would raise the stakes beyond the socially awkward to real danger.
See lessAn immature government programmer’s promotion is denied by his overbearing boss, so he resorts to childish pranks with his beleaguered coworkers in the hope he’ll get transferred.
The logline is too wordy. You can get rid of: "...immature..." this is evident,? "...overbearing..." adds little as he or she are already the bad guy or gal for denying the promotion, and "...childish..." is implied in the action. Also re state the actions and events in a causal manner, i.e: After hRead more
The logline is too wordy. You can get rid of: “…immature…” this is evident,? “…overbearing…” adds little as he or she are already the bad guy or gal for denying the promotion, and “…childish…” is implied in the action.
Also re state the actions and events in a causal manner, i.e:
After his promotion is denied by his supervisor, a government programmer resorts to pranks in an attempt to get fired.
Not sure there is enough meat on the proverbial bones for a whole feature here,? a short perhaps but a 85+ minute film not so much.
See lessWhen a portal to hell mysteriously opens, an inexperienced mage born of the hellish dimension, is the only one who can close it and bring peace to the kingdom.
Why does the portal open up? Or rather, who opens it up? It feels like there is a big demonic bad guy you're hiding from the reader, and in super natural/fantasy, a story would benefit from having a clearly described antagonist.Also, is his birth place of any significance to the story? Sounds like tRead more
Why does the portal open up? Or rather, who opens it up? It feels like there is a big demonic bad guy you’re hiding from the reader, and in super natural/fantasy, a story would benefit from having a clearly described antagonist.
Also, is his birth place of any significance to the story? Sounds like this description can be cut (not sure what a hellish dimension is either).?
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