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  1. Posted: July 16, 2017In: Drama

    After a young businessman is told that he is a loser and his life is lonely and meaningless, he must discover what makes an individual feel loved in order to give his life more purpose.

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    Added an answer on July 16, 2017 at 6:06 pm

    What the others wrote. Check out the 'Formula' tab on the top bar for more information on logline convetions.

    What the others wrote.
    Check out the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar for more information on logline convetions.

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  2. Posted: July 15, 2017In: Thriller

    That psychedelic drug would be developed by the person who cooked it getting to the highest purity range In the planet,in/on each individual will be processed differently and this is what alarms the person because it’d mean the reality on this world that the consumer is expiriencing COULD change.An entity would change it,anentity that uses the connection that occurs when the receptors in the brain receive the substance molecule(which can be related to all psychedelic drugs known to mankind including “the god’s molecule”) as it’s path to communicate with the person(man or woman). thriller/enhancer/ introspective/suspense (don’t think about stealing it or filtering it…this entity will know…I AM THE OWNER).

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    Added an answer on July 15, 2017 at 11:21 am

    I think this was posted by mistake as a new logline.Yunsa,Was this intended as a response to a post on a previous thread?If so, let me know and I'll delete this so you can post on the original thread.

    I think this was posted by mistake as a new logline.

    Yunsa,

    Was this intended as a response to a post on a previous thread?

    If so, let me know and I’ll delete this so you can post on the original thread.

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  3. Posted: June 29, 2017In: Drama

    After the death of a longtime friend, a man’s forgotten imagination is rekindled by his daughter.

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    Added an answer on July 1, 2017 at 11:30 am

    The inciting incident seems vague, how can a person forget his own imagination and how can a friend dying cause that? Other wise, the stakes are not clear, what's the worst that can happen should he not get his imagination back? Perhaps you should add a stakes character or stakes event: i.e the memoRead more

    The inciting incident seems vague, how can a person forget his own imagination and how can a friend dying cause that?

    Other wise, the stakes are not clear, what’s the worst that can happen should he not get his imagination back?

    Perhaps you should add a stakes character or stakes event: i.e the memory and imagination must be restored by a certain date in order to win a competition or help a person close to them?

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