Imagine sitting opposite an executive and pitching them a story about characters who don’t know what they want and haven’t got any clear goals. It’s basically the same as Seinfeld’s pitch for a show about nothing… albeit that worked for him, but it was a parody of TV executives.

What is a good comparison for your show? Can you say: yours is like ‘this’ meets ‘that’?

Let’s assume your MC is the Indonesian woman. You wrote she moved to the city in pursuit of her dreams, but what does that mean in a practical sense? Also, what action does she take to achieve them?