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A man seeking love falls for a lady he will marry. When he walks in on his best friend sleeping with her, he then must make a choice to either walk away or get his revenge.
So will he walk away or will he get revenge? ?This is your story, where as the decision to do either one is just one small step or a single scene. The logline describes a generic love triangle but no plot, what is his goal? Here is an example of a better structure using the same concept: After he waRead more
So will he walk away or will he get revenge? ?This is your story, where as the decision to do either one is just one small step or a single scene.
The logline describes a generic love triangle but no plot, what is his goal?
Here is an example of a better structure using the same concept:
See lessAfter he walks in on his best friend and wife making love a [good description] [main character] must [do something interesting] to achieve [a compelling goal].
After his friends are arrested for robbing the convenience store he works at as an inside job, he must rob his own workplace in order to bail them out before they rat on him.
Richieve pretty much cleaned up the logline. The only thing is that directly after the robbery the owners and police would likely make it very hard to rob the place again. One would imagine that they would install security alarms and cameras, in any event the main character comes across as an awfulRead more
Richieve pretty much cleaned up the logline.
The only thing is that directly after the robbery the owners and police would likely make it very hard to rob the place again. One would imagine that they would install security alarms and cameras, in any event the main character comes across as an awful person. He robs from his boss in the first place, then robs again to protect his own skin, why would the audience care at all about what happens to him?
See lessHaunted by the tragic loss of his estranged father, a young Samoan-American must choose between his corporate job or follow in his late father?s footsteps as the last in a long line of fire-knife dancers.
His decision would make for a great act 1 climax. Best to plan on shifting the decision earlier in the story and let the resulting action play out as the bulk of the film.
His decision would make for a great act 1 climax.
See lessBest to plan on shifting the decision earlier in the story and let the resulting action play out as the bulk of the film.