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A serial killer taxi driver takes revenge on behalf of victimised passengers while trying to avoid detection.
A character that doesn't change will be 2 dimensional and likely make for a boring journey. Your philosophical question aside, why would the audience care about a person doing a "bad" thing and not whom doesn't evolve during the story?
A character that doesn’t change will be 2 dimensional and likely make for a boring journey. Your philosophical question aside, why would the audience care about a person doing a “bad” thing and not whom doesn’t evolve during the story?
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The plot in this logline is confusing. What world problems do they need to solve? Why? How? All of them at once or are they separated into groups to solve one problem per group? If an apocalypse has taken place, what part of the world is left for them to work on? If the main character is the boy, whRead more
The plot in this logline is confusing.
What world problems do they need to solve?
Why?
How?
All of them at once or are they separated into groups to solve one problem per group?
If an apocalypse has taken place, what part of the world is left for them to work on?
If the main character is the boy, what is his goal in specific terms?
How does him being an albino make his task harder or easier to complete? In other words what is the relevance of his skin colour?
There are too many elements described in this logline, and as a result the plot and MC inner journey are unclear. Best to describe one plot about one main character with one goal in mind.
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You haven't described story beats rather the bare bones of a premise (not to be confused with character arc by the way), is there a particular bad guy in his sights? Is there one definitive thing he wants to do above all? In other words, what is the serial killer's story goal? This could help structRead more
You haven’t described story beats rather the bare bones of a premise (not to be confused with character arc by the way), is there a particular bad guy in his sights? Is there one definitive thing he wants to do above all? In other words, what is the serial killer’s story goal? This could help structure a plot and shape the logline.
Secondly at what point does he realise the error of his ways? When does he overcome his flaw?
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