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A Talent Agency for Dogs struggles to find a dog for an important German beer commercial.
Best to describe a premise from the point of view of a single character and explain their stakes. Who is the main character? Why is it so important to find a dog for this one add? Why is this casting job more important than any other casting job they have?
Best to describe a premise from the point of view of a single character and explain their stakes.
Who is the main character? Why is it so important to find a dog for this one add? Why is this casting job more important than any other casting job they have?
See lessA troubled young man converts to Islam to please his Muslim girlfriend, gets set up by a psychopathic terrorist in a train bomb attack, he must evacuate his frantic landsmen before a ticking time-bomb kills them.
I think you miss understood the point DPG was making in his post.My opinion is that your concept lacks enough substance and logic to suffice for a feature film. I recommend you either invest your time and effort in a different concept all together, or FUNDAMENTALLY change the current one.If you chooRead more
I think you miss understood the point DPG was making in his post.
My opinion is that your concept lacks enough substance and logic to suffice for a feature film. I recommend you either invest your time and effort in a different concept all together, or FUNDAMENTALLY change the current one.
If you choose the latter (despite all previous comments given) one suggestion I can make is to employ a protagonist/antagonist relationship as the central relationship in the story instead of the love story. In this case the young man converts, for what ever reason – love, ideology or what ever fits the theme, and as a result gets involved with a mentor that turns out to be mad. Towards the end of act one our protagonist realizes that the mentor is planning a terror attack – inciting incident, as a result of this he must fight the mentor gone antagonist to save his fellow countrymen and women on the train.
All the best.
See lessA troubled young man converts to Islam to please his Muslim girlfriend, gets set up by a psychopathic terrorist in a train bomb attack, he must evacuate his frantic landsmen before a ticking time-bomb kills them.
Except for the odd wording adjustment, there appears to be very little change between the previous and current versions of this logline. The previous comments still apply - it lacks personal stakes, character credibility and raises too many questions about the basic logic employed at the heart of thRead more
Except for the odd wording adjustment, there appears to be very little change between the previous and current versions of this logline.
See lessThe previous comments still apply – it lacks personal stakes, character credibility and raises too many questions about the basic logic employed at the heart of the premise.