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When intruders break into her home, the ghost of a paraplegic must save her unsuspecting husband from the intruders? sinister plan that involves planting venomous snakes in the husband?s closet.
It wold be better if the logline described the intruders as the ones responsible for her death, then much like in Ghost the stakes are frighteningly plausible.
It wold be better if the logline described the intruders as the ones responsible for her death, then much like in Ghost the stakes are frighteningly plausible.
See lessA retired undefeated boxing champion William leads a simple life after losing all his money and a former boxing champion Michael insults him in a live press conference which leads the battle between their sons as they become rivals. The outcome of the battle leads Michael to challenge William to fight him in the ring and he accepts it.
The main character's identity is not clear. This story could be about either one of the former boxing champs or either one of their sons. You need to pick one of the four characters you currently have in your logline and re draft the logline to focus on him achieving a goal, otherwise the logline doRead more
The main character’s identity is not clear.
This story could be about either one of the former boxing champs or either one of their sons. You need to pick one of the four characters you currently have in your logline and re draft the logline to focus on him achieving a goal, otherwise the logline doesn’t describe a plot.
See lessWhen a recluse programmer is coerced into camping and survives a Werewolf attack, he must find a cure and escape the sadistic poachers hunting him.
The main character being coerced is not important to the plot and can be cut from the logline, what is important is the Werewolf attack. This describes the genre and gets the story started. Here is my try: After a reclusive programmer survives a Werewolf attack, he must find a cure as he escapes theRead more
The main character being coerced is not important to the plot and can be cut from the logline, what is important is the Werewolf attack.
This describes the genre and gets the story started.
Here is my try:
See lessAfter a reclusive programmer survives a Werewolf attack, he must find a cure as he escapes the sadistic Werewolf hunters chasing him.