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When a military-trained biologist’s husband unexpectedly returns alive from a secret mission, she must go on a quest to a mysterious lighthouse to save his life – and the world.
What is it about his return that motivates her to go to the lighthouse? I think that's the key to the story as it illustrates her emotional and personal stake.
What is it about his return that motivates her to go to the lighthouse? I think that’s the key to the story as it illustrates her emotional and personal stake.
See lessRevised: After her children are taken, on account of her mental illness, a holier-than-though mother must reclaim them, by undergoing a life-threatening VR therapy: defeating embodiments of her demons in simulated combat.
You need to decide what is the better goal, getting the kids back or curing herself. Richiev's version, in my mind, is stronger as it gives her a clear objective goal we can see her achieve without the need for exposition. Her kids being taken away from her is a very powerful image and one that woulRead more
You need to decide what is the better goal, getting the kids back or curing herself. Richiev’s version, in my mind, is stronger as it gives her a clear objective goal we can see her achieve without the need for exposition.
Her kids being taken away from her is a very powerful image and one that would clearly motivate her, a positive diagnosis less so.
See lessAn alien politician whose world was colonised by humans must fight a corrupt system and a supremacist organisation to rise to the top.
This is a run of the mill criticism of colonialisation relocated to an alien plant. "Evil" humans colonise and oppress, native fights back - there have been so many stories told about this to date, aside from the alien, I don't see how this brings anything new to the table. What does the alien do thRead more
This is a run of the mill criticism of colonialisation relocated to an alien plant. “Evil” humans colonise and oppress, native fights back – there have been so many stories told about this to date, aside from the alien, I don’t see how this brings anything new to the table. What does the alien do that makes his actions interesting? How does he plan on freeing his people? Will there be a revolt?
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