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?tittle:______ ? ? ? ?”The black?chines s” The black america rapper and ?university?student ?went?to ?china rural area with his?chines?girl?friend?and class mate ?in summer?break?straggle?to?adapt?culture and discept with her family and community and her?chine’s?ex boy?friend
Richiev's version works well - I can see a plot from reading it as there will likely be multiple obstacles on his way to father approval each with its own unique culture clash and dramatic stake. That said if you had one big thing he had to do to get dear old dad's approval it would help focus the pRead more
Richiev’s version works well – I can see a plot from reading it as there will likely be multiple obstacles on his way to father approval each with its own unique culture clash and dramatic stake. That said if you had one big thing he had to do to get dear old dad’s approval it would help focus the plot. What if he had to master Chines opera or Kung Fu or traditional Chinese painting?
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Anti-heroes are tough, when done well they're great because they're rare but otherwise, more often than not, they fail to engage an audience. You would have to work extra hard to set up an otherwise hopeless situation so that his crime is seen, by the audience, as doing the wrong thing for the rightRead more
Anti-heroes are tough, when done well they’re great because they’re rare but otherwise, more often than not, they fail to engage an audience.
You would have to work extra hard to set up an otherwise hopeless situation so that his crime is seen, by the audience, as doing the wrong thing for the right reason. I should know, just finished directing a short I wrote about a guy doing the wrong thing for the right reasons.
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I, like DPG, can't get a clear grasp on the plot from the logline. After reading your explanation, it's a bit easier to understand what you're trying to do in terms of a premise - a time loop that threatens to undermine the integrity of space-time. However, loglines are used to describe plots and thRead more
I, like DPG, can’t get a clear grasp on the plot from the logline. After reading your explanation, it’s a bit easier to understand what you’re trying to do in terms of a premise – a time loop that threatens to undermine the integrity of space-time. However, loglines are used to describe plots and that’s still unclear.
What specifically does the MC want to achieve by the end of the story and how will he go about achieving it? In other words, what are the time cops threatening to do to him?
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