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  1. Posted: January 2, 2018In: Fantasy

    When a medieval princess releases an evil spirit that intends to murder her husband, she must find a way to destroy the spirit and save her husband.

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    Added an answer on January 2, 2018 at 4:26 pm

    The story starts when the spirit threatens to kill her husband - as inciting incidents go a threat is fine but it can be better. What if the spirit were to kill the husband and try to kill her child? Now the inciting incident is much more significant and the threat gains some weight. Best to rewordRead more

    The story starts when the spirit threatens to kill her husband – as inciting incidents go a threat is fine but it can be better. What if the spirit were to kill the husband and try to kill her child? Now the inciting incident is much more significant and the threat gains some weight.

    Best to reword the logline so it starts from the threat to kill and then describes the action she takes to eliminate said threat – destroy the spirit, banish it to hell, or catch it in a Ghost Trap (who you gonna call…).

    Ultimately, whatever it is she does needs to be described in the logline in more detail than it is now.

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  2. Posted: January 2, 2018In: Comedy

    To motivate himself to get back into shape, a former college athlete proposes to his off & on girlfriend , only to find out she only said yes to impress her to woo her high school sweetheart.

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    Added an answer on January 2, 2018 at 4:16 pm

    Agreed with Richiev. Either one of them would make a good character, best to pick one and develop the story around him or her. Which of the characters do you feel most represents your writing interests?

    Agreed with Richiev.

    Either one of them would make a good character, best to pick one and develop the story around him or her. Which of the characters do you feel most represents your writing interests?

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  3. Posted: December 29, 2017In: SciFi

    Multiple Reality Disorder

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    Good point raised by DPG, if you look at Back to the Future the stakes were the MC's very existence. In this case, it's just rejigging a few facts, could you somehow connect that to a life and death stake for the MC?

    Good point raised by DPG, if you look at Back to the Future the stakes were the MC’s very existence. In this case, it’s just rejigging a few facts, could you somehow connect that to a life and death stake for the MC?

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