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In a rural town, when a young, na?ve wife of an older, powerful cult leader becomes a secret prostitute, she discovers the town’s and cult’s dirty dark secrets that empower her to create a sex empire.
Consider the cause and effect of the elements in a logline as important as the goal and events. How does she being married to a cult leader make her want to become a prostitute? How does her discovering secrets "...empower her..."? What does "...empower her..." mean in practical terms? What does a sRead more
Consider the cause and effect of the elements in a logline as important as the goal and events.
How does she being married to a cult leader make her want to become a prostitute?
How does her discovering secrets “…empower her…”?
What does “…empower her…” mean in practical terms?
What does a sex empire mean in practical terms?
All these things don’t seem logically connected.
Becoming a prostitute is an extreme and highly unusual way to deal with sexual repression, she could easily go out and have sex with as many men and women as she likes – she doesn’t have to become a prostitute if it’s only sex she’s after.
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The concept lacks dramatic stakes. What's the worst that would happen should he make the film and stay true to his vision? At the same time, what's the worst that would happen should he not? I simply can't see a friendship as a worthy enough stake, certainly not in today's saturated market full of hRead more
The concept lacks dramatic stakes. What’s the worst that would happen should he make the film and stay true to his vision? At the same time, what’s the worst that would happen should he not? I simply can’t see a friendship as a worthy enough stake, certainly not in today’s saturated market full of high-end dramas and action-packed adventures. More so, this is a Hollywood insider story and most producers hate/avoid reading these kinds of scripts.
The Coen Brothers could get away with it, maybe…
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Agreed with Foxtrot25 and Richiev. You can start the logline with him being taken hostage but you need to describe what he must do to resolve the situation. I would add that you could give him an unusual ability that he could use to free himself. What if he is an ex-cop, a veteran, or former MMA figRead more
Agreed with Foxtrot25 and Richiev.
You can start the logline with him being taken hostage but you need to describe what he must do to resolve the situation. I would add that you could give him an unusual ability that he could use to free himself. What if he is an ex-cop, a veteran, or former MMA fighter? Anything really as long as it gives him a skill he can use.
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