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  1. Posted: January 1, 2018In: Action

    A soldier returns home desiring to become a professional poker player, believing it’s a safer vocation than army combat, so she thought, until winning a large poker pot from a serial killer. Now she is back in a battle to save lives including her own.

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    Added an answer on January 2, 2018 at 4:40 pm

    The logline is too long and convoluted, here is a reduced version: After winning a large poker pot from a serial killer, a veteran must fight to save her life. It's rather lean on plot - she wins, he chases, they fight, she beats him (or not) and lives happily ever after. What else does she do? WhatRead more

    The logline is too long and convoluted, here is a reduced version:

    After winning a large poker pot from a serial killer, a veteran must fight to save her life.

    It’s rather lean on plot – she wins, he chases, they fight, she beats him (or not) and lives happily ever after.

    What else does she do?

    What other threats are there except to her life? How much money was in the pot? If it’s less than 50k just drop the money and let him have it, if more, is it really worth dying for? Was it an illigal game? Can she not just call the cops and report that a crazy guy/gal is after her?

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  2. Posted: January 1, 2018In: Drama

    After an impromptu one-night stand during a Christmas Eve blizzard en route to her mother?s house, a struggling-with-life woman finds herself spending the holiday with her drunken stranger and his family while she waits out the storm.

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    Added an answer on January 2, 2018 at 4:32 pm

    Agreed with the rest - the dramatic stakes are unclear. Stay, go, it's all very pedestrian relationship stuff. What's unique about her situation that makes this story film worthy?

    Agreed with the rest – the dramatic stakes are unclear.
    Stay, go, it’s all very pedestrian relationship stuff.
    What’s unique about her situation that makes this story film worthy?

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  3. Posted: January 2, 2018In: Action

    He lost his winning 300 grand ticket in a gust of wind then later finds it in a man’s cold dead fingers.

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    Added an answer on January 2, 2018 at 4:28 pm

    Easy, break off the fingers, take the ticket and head to the nearest lottery office - end of story.

    Easy, break off the fingers, take the ticket and head to the nearest lottery office – end of story.

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