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  1. Posted: November 14, 2017In: Thriller

    The televised poker tournament is on an hour break and the chip leader is locked in a utility closet; she hears a bomb ticking. Can she defuse it and get back in time to win?

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on November 14, 2017 at 6:27 pm

    Is this a short or full-length feature?

    Is this a short or full-length feature?

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  2. Posted: November 14, 2017In: Comedy

    A disgruntled actress attempts to renew her U.S. residency by agreeing to help a politician fabricate a personable image in a reality TV show about the Arizona hierarchy.

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    Added an answer on November 14, 2017 at 6:25 pm

    The premise seems a bit convoluted. As Craig pointed out, what is she disgruntled about? Is her disgruntled attitude justified or is she a spoiled bratt? How is she going to fabricate a personable image? What does Arizona hierarchy mean?

    The premise seems a bit convoluted. As Craig pointed out, what is she disgruntled about? Is her disgruntled attitude justified or is she a spoiled bratt?

    How is she going to fabricate a personable image?

    What does Arizona hierarchy mean?

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  3. Posted: November 14, 2017In: Drama

    When a young, successful driven singer’s life becomes subdued in the hands of her corrupted uncle and his label, she must seek a way out to regain back control, within herself and those she love.

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    Added an answer on November 14, 2017 at 6:20 pm

    This is too vague a description for a logline. Check out the 'Formula' tab on the top bar for more detailed information about loglines. What specific event forces/motivates her to take action at the start of the story? What is the her flaw? She seems perfect at this point, and perfect characters areRead more

    This is too vague a description for a logline. Check out the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar for more detailed information about loglines.

    What specific event forces/motivates her to take action at the start of the story?

    What is the her flaw? She seems perfect at this point, and perfect characters are normally boring.

    What is the character’s specific goal? What must she achieve, or fail to achieve, by the end of the story?

    What is at stake? What’s the worst that will happen should she succeed or fail?

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