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When a devoted wife attends her high school reunion alone, a former classmate’s misspoken phrase triggers her alter ego as an elite assassin. Her husband/handler must intervene or there won’t be another reunion.
Nobody ever complained about the stakes in a story being too high... The In-laws, Austin Powers, This Is The End are all good examples of successful (for a reason) comedies with high stakes. High stakes in any genre = better story. According to your logline the husband is the MC, it would be best toRead more
Nobody ever complained about the stakes in a story being too high… The In-laws, Austin Powers, This Is The End are all good examples of successful (for a reason) comedies with high stakes.
High stakes in any genre = better story.
According to your logline the husband is the MC, it would be best to acknowledge that when discussing the concept with producers.
See lessWhen a devoted wife attends her high school reunion alone, a former classmate’s misspoken phrase triggers her alter ego as an elite assassin. Her husband/handler must intervene or there won’t be another reunion.
So it's the husband's story, not the wife's. He has to take action to achieve the end goal of the story, whereas she is just an out of control autonomous agent. After his wife, a sleeper agent, is accidentally triggered, a secret government operative must stop her from assassinating the Russian presRead more
So it’s the husband’s story, not the wife’s. He has to take action to achieve the end goal of the story, whereas she is just an out of control autonomous agent.
After his wife, a sleeper agent, is accidentally triggered, a secret government operative must stop her from assassinating the Russian president.
I kind of thought having her go after a bigger target, with higher stakes, would be more interesting.
See lessA lonely computer programmer, looking for Mr. Right, is shut down by the government for creating an empathetic AI, so she tries something unorthodox?interacting with a human.
Agreed with Craig and DPG. There are a few fundamental logic flaws in the premise, however, it does have a few interesting ideas which, in my opinion, are worth exploring. It's worth noting that this is somewhat similar to Her, in that a human falls for an AI, and you'd need to introduce an elementRead more
Agreed with Craig and DPG.
There are a few fundamental logic flaws in the premise, however, it does have a few interesting ideas which, in my opinion, are worth exploring.
It’s worth noting that this is somewhat similar to Her, in that a human falls for an AI, and you’d need to introduce an element to distinguish the two.
What if, you remove the government element (bit cliche’) and have the woman and AI in love. However, at some point, the AI realizes that he can never fully give her what she needs and goes about setting her up with a real man. I actually think this could be more interesting if told from the AI’s point of view than that of the woman’s. Just a thought.
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