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After leaving his tiny home village, A lonely man returns many years later to win back his childhood sweetheart only to find out she never existed.
Agreed with DPG and Savinh0. Also, "...lonely man..." sounds rather generic, is there anything else about him that would make him a unique character? Preferably, this would be a flaw he has to overcome. On a side note, did the sweetheart actually exist and was kidnapped or killed? Or was she a figmeRead more
Agreed with DPG and Savinh0.
Also, “…lonely man…” sounds rather generic, is there anything else about him that would make him a unique character? Preferably, this would be a flaw he has to overcome.
On a side note, did the sweetheart actually exist and was kidnapped or killed? Or was she a figment of his imagination?
See lessA British Major and aristocrat must team up with a vulgar guerilla leader in order to blow up a bridge in Nazi occupied Greece. Based on a true story.
DPG's re write is very good, I'd add that it could change the outcome of the war. Based on a true story, an aristocratic British major and a vulgar guerilla leader together must blow up a bridge, in Nazi occupied Greece, that could change the outcome of WW2.
DPG’s re write is very good, I’d add that it could change the outcome of the war.
Based on a true story, an aristocratic British major and a vulgar guerilla leader together must blow up a bridge, in Nazi occupied Greece, that could change the outcome of WW2.
See lessWhen a genie in a pill bottle grants him his wish to be an action hero, a meek civil servant suffering from high anxiety must survive his mundane day job that magically transformed into a series of spectacular action sequences.
What will the civil servant do in the story?Genie appears, but now what? The series of "...spectacular action sequences..." are not a plot they are gags - granted, a nice premise for a comedy but this doesn't describe a story.
What will the civil servant do in the story?
See lessGenie appears, but now what? The series of “…spectacular action sequences…” are not a plot they are gags – granted, a nice premise for a comedy but this doesn’t describe a story.