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When a group of argonauts go missing during the California Gold Rush, a solitary hunter must lead a relief party to the claim where a dangerous beast guards a vast fortune.
Agreed with DPG.Also, is the hunter aware of the beast before heading out on the expedition or is he unaware of the danger ahead?Seeing as he is the main character, I suggest he is made aware of the beast, the choice to go after it will be harder to make. I would go as far as to say that he has knowRead more
Agreed with DPG.
Also, is the hunter aware of the beast before heading out on the expedition or is he unaware of the danger ahead?
Seeing as he is the main character, I suggest he is made aware of the beast, the choice to go after it will be harder to make. I would go as far as to say that he has known of the beast for years prior to the incident and has been waiting for an opportunity to go after it. The logline should focus on the hunter’s perspective and motivation and less on the miners.
See lessA relief party ventures into the mountains of California during the Gold Rush to find a group of missing argonauts only to be hunted by a terrible beast that guards the claim.
Who is the main character? And Argonauts seems out of place, what other description can you use? Miners? Prospectors? Why is it so important to him or her to find the group?Is the story about them finding the missing people or about them escaping/sruviving the beast?
Who is the main character?
And Argonauts seems out of place, what other description can you use? Miners? Prospectors?
Why is it so important to him or her to find the group?
Is the story about them finding the missing people or about them escaping/sruviving the beast?
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What DPG wrote. Loglines are meant to be simple and easy to understand. Check out the 'Formula' tab for more information about logline conventions.
What DPG wrote.
Loglines are meant to be simple and easy to understand. Check out the ‘Formula’ tab for more information about logline conventions.
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