1. Posted: September 1, 2017In:

    Falling in love while helping a cat woman return to her Earth alone leaves an insular college student struggling to maintain his belief in her and find a way through the gateway.

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    Rivercoon, All the previous comments to the older versions of the logline apply to the latest as well. You need higher stakes and cinematic actions/events.

    Rivercoon,

    All the previous comments to the older versions of the logline apply to the latest as well.

    You need higher stakes and cinematic actions/events.

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  2. Posted: September 6, 2017In:

    S-Con is a quirky gaming convention where players exchange in-game goods, and young con-artist Bryon Spells is ready to rob it blind. But when the highest ranking player is revealed to be his estranged father, Bryon must mend the broken relationship, or risk the entire heist.

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    Agreed with Richiev. Also, no need for names, unless it's a character from history or a pre existing IP. Is the story going to take place in the VR world of the game or in real life during the gaming convention?

    Agreed with Richiev. Also, no need for names, unless it’s a character from history or a pre existing IP.

    Is the story going to take place in the VR world of the game or in real life during the gaming convention?

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  3. Posted: September 6, 2017In:

    When allegations prompt a rising Senior to permanently leave home, he must feign loyalty to a commune that hides him so he can attain residency there and take his GED.

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    What are these allegations? Why would they force him to leave the home? Wouldn't his goal be to prove the allegations wrong, if so, why is his goal to take the GED?

    What are these allegations? Why would they force him to leave the home? Wouldn’t his goal be to prove the allegations wrong, if so, why is his goal to take the GED?

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